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以My Family’s Mid-autumn Day為題目,寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。
內(nèi)容提示:
(1)介紹中秋節(jié)和中秋節(jié)日期。
(2)介紹中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)食品和過(guò)節(jié)方式。
(3)你的家人們一起過(guò)中秋節(jié)的情景。
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My Family’s Mid-autumn Day
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【2】
假設(shè)Michael是你的美國(guó)朋友,他想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——中秋節(jié)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給他寫一封郵件。
內(nèi)容:
1.重要性;
2.傳統(tǒng)活動(dòng)及食物;
3.意義。
要求:
1.內(nèi)容完整,字跡工整,表達(dá)通順;
2.詞數(shù)不少于80,郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Michael,
I heard that you want to know about the Mid-Autumn Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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假如你是初二的學(xué)生李華,你們學(xué)校正在開展中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的社會(huì)實(shí)踐課活動(dòng),你想向你校的英國(guó)交換生Peter介紹一下慶祝今年中秋節(jié)的計(jì)劃。請(qǐng)用英文寫一封電子郵件,告訴他你將和誰(shuí)一起慶祝今年的中秋節(jié),你們將如何慶祝。
提示詞語(yǔ):celebrate (慶祝), mooncakes, solve riddles on lanterns, culture
提示問(wèn)題:
●Who will you celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with?
●What will you do during the festival?
Dear Peter,
How is it going? The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China and it will be on September 21st this year. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Are you interested in it? I really hope you can come and celebrate this festival with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【4】
假設(shè)你是王濤,你的美國(guó)筆友(Peter)對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,他寫信向你詢問(wèn)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)(the Mid-Autumn Festival)的習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫一封回信。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
(1)When is it celebrated?
(2)What do people usually do during the festival?
(3)What do you think of the festival?
要求:
(1)包括提示中所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
(2)語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)意連貫,文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。
(3)詞數(shù)80左右(回信的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
參考詞匯:農(nóng)歷Chinese lunar calendar
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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愛老敬老是我國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)文化之一。在慶祝建黨100周年之際,你校將舉辦以“獻(xiàn)禮建黨百年,講好中國(guó)故事,弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)從我國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日(例如Spring festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Double Ninth Day, Mid-autumn Festival等)中選擇一個(gè)節(jié)日作為你的演講內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。
(1)開場(chǎng)問(wèn)候及自我介紹;
(2)節(jié)日名稱及其活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和意義;
(3)這個(gè)節(jié)日帶給你的感受。
注意:(1)文章不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;(2)可適 當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫,80詞左右。
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參考答案:
1.例文:
My Family’s Mid-autumn Day
Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese traditional festival. It falls on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar. Chinese people usually get together to celebrate it at home. On that evening they eat moon cakes, dumplings and some fruits. They also watch the moon outside their houses.
I like Mid-autumn Day very much. On that day we always go to my grandparents’ house. So do my uncles and aunts. We celebrate it there. All of us usually take something delicious to my grandparents. They are always very glad to see us. Then we eat moon cakes and watch the moon together. At that time everyone is very happy. I love all of my family. I love Mid-autumn Day.
【詳解】1.題干解讀:該題目屬于材料作文寫作,要求按照所給的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀慵胰绾芜^(guò)中秋節(jié)。注意寫作時(shí)要點(diǎn)要齊全,同時(shí)也可進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文應(yīng)該用第一、三人稱來(lái)敘述;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);寫作時(shí),注意承接上文,根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示具體介紹介紹中秋節(jié)和中秋節(jié)日期,中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)食品和過(guò)節(jié)方式以及你的家人們一起過(guò)中秋節(jié)的情景;文中一定要包含題干中列出的所有要點(diǎn);可以運(yùn)用一些短語(yǔ)和常用句型為文章增添色彩;注意單詞書寫的準(zhǔn)確度,語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確度,上下文注意連接的流暢度,以及邏輯合理。
2.例文
Dear Michael,
I heard that you want to know about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on lunar August 15th of a year. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. On this day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their families. At night, people often enjoy admiring the moon and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes in the open air. Mooncakes carry people’s wishes to the families they love. Some people don’t come back home until midnight.
This is the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】1.題干解讀:本題是寫一封郵件,根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——中秋節(jié)。
2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第三人稱;短文可分為三段式,首先開篇點(diǎn)題;然后具體介紹中秋節(jié)的重要性、傳統(tǒng)活動(dòng)和食物,以及意義;最后總結(jié)和表達(dá)希望。注意行文連貫,邏輯清晰,無(wú)拼寫和語(yǔ)法使用錯(cuò)誤。
3.例文:
Dear Peter,
How is it going? The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China and it will be on September 21st this year. In order to celebrate this festival, we will get together with all our family members. We will clean the house and have a big dinner. We will also eat mooncakes. They are delicious. What’s more, it’s very interesting to solve riddles on lanterns. On that day, the moon is round and bright, so it is good for us to enjoy it.
Are you interested in it? I really hope you can come and celebrate this festival with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】1.題干解讀:本題要求以李華的身份,根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一封電子郵件給英國(guó)交換生Peter,內(nèi)容包括:你將和誰(shuí)一起慶祝今年的中秋節(jié),你們將如何慶祝。
2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接開頭和結(jié)尾,緊扣提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行發(fā)揮;寫作完成后應(yīng)確保文章內(nèi)容齊全,行文流暢,語(yǔ)言符合規(guī)范和英文表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
4.例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. It falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together, eat mooncakes, and share our stories.
I think this festival is very meaningful. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.
Yours,
Wang Tao
【詳解】1.題干解讀:本文是一篇書信作文。向筆友Peter介紹中秋節(jié)。
2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。分為兩段式:第一段介紹中秋節(jié)在什么時(shí)候以及中秋節(jié)人們所做的事情;第二段發(fā)表自己對(duì)中秋節(jié)的看法。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性,做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
5.例文:
My favorite festival
Hello, everyone. My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the important traditional festivals in China. It falls on August 15 in the lunar calendar. On that day, almost everyone gets together with his or her family, eating mooncakes, chatting and admiring the moon. Everyone is very happy on the Mid-Autumn night.
I remembered that on the Mid-Autumn Festival last year, my English teacher, my classmates and I had a meaningful party in the classroom. Our teacher gave each of us a mooncake which she bought two days before when it rained heavily. In order to keep the mooncakes dry, she was all wet when she got to school. Our teacher gave all of her love to us! At the party, we ate the mooncakes happily. We were all happy and exciting!
【詳解】1.題干解讀:這篇作文要求考生根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),寫一個(gè)演講稿介紹一個(gè)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,屬于講稿寫作。
2.寫作指導(dǎo):審題可知,這篇作文需用第一、三人稱,以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)兩種時(shí)態(tài)展開敘述。寫作中要按照提示的要點(diǎn),首先作自我介紹,然后介紹自己最喜歡的節(jié)日名稱(中秋節(jié))和習(xí)俗,再結(jié)合切身經(jīng)歷敘述過(guò)中秋節(jié)的情景,最后談一談感受。行文時(shí)注意主謂一致和上下文的過(guò)渡,符合邏輯關(guān)系,保證無(wú)語(yǔ)法和單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。
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